What’s a better title??

    I wanted to write a post on a personal experience of an accident. I was wondering if the title should be "The cost of foolishness". Maybe, madness or stupidity was more apt for the story!! One corner of my mind suggested a title like "Brush with Death" or "Tryst with Death", inspired from the famous speech by Pandit Nehru. But then, my readers aren't the ones born in 1940's. For the 80's born readers of my blog, maybe I should have an appealing title like "The Bitchy Bikini Babe and her Boyfriend at the Beach". Or would "Challenging the watery grave" be more appropriate? Or should I highlight the consequence with a title like "The sunset that wasn't captured on my camera/phone"? Wouldn't "When slipper 'slips' over algae" be the most simple yet effective title?? But none of these would highlight my helplessness like "The dying moments under water".

 

PS: This is an attempt at a new way of story-telling. Hope you have got my story. Expect to see the 'normal' form of the story soon. Don't forget to hit the comment link, more so if you liked the style of communication.